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Post by jade on Sept 16, 2008 15:15:21 GMT -5
Me My first name is Tala. I expect you to call me by that. I've walked these streets for 14 years. If you can't see, I am a female. I have no occupation. I am one of The Burned.
My Inner and Outer Tidbits.
This is my personality ;; I am a nature lover, I usually live in the wilderness and stay there most of the time. I usually don't care what others think of me. I prefer a bow to sword work, other than a fine rapier, which I am skilled with, though not as highly tuned like the bow. I go on hunts and ride on horseback everywhere I go, my preferred form on travel if I didn't morph already. I don't have many friends, as I spend most my my time in preferred silence and solitude. As other animals, I make friends very easily, because I can stay an animal forever if I wanted to. I am very sneaky and nimble, as I can walk through the forest without making any sound at all. The burned usually use me as a spy, though I have no set job. As a small animal, like a rodent, I can get the materials needed for polituces and potions for healers, and with a dog's sense of smell I can track it better.
My intelligence is very far fetched, as is my other qualities. The only thing that stops me is the love for those I respect, which blocks out my good sense sometimes. Fortunately, I don't respect many people... so I seem to do just fine. The only ones I respect are the god, and only on major holidays do I even remember they exist, because of my strange connection with nature and animals that keeps me occupied. I live alone, in a small log cabin in the forest, because my family are all dead, so I fled that home and discovered why I had strange powers. I'll tell of that later though.
Well, I am afraid of bees and I'm claustrophobic. My mother is Lara. My father is Logan. I have no siblings. This is my background ;;
I was born in a small city, where everyone knew each other. My mom and my dad loved me very much until the humans made an assumption that since they were different, they were part of the Burned, a thing they didn't even know themselves. As soon as they found that out, they killed them, when I was at school. They tried to kill me too, and I didn't understand why. A gun was aimed at my head and I got my Burn.. and I didn't know what happened at first. I thought I had been shot, so that is why I fled. I felt lucky enough to be alive, until I looked in a mirror... and I saw the Burn. I waited until a few days later my power was revealed. I headed for my house from the school, my stomach in a knot as I knew what to expect. As I saw their bodies at home I fled to the forest, where I traveled far, the humans hot on my trail until I woke up one day as a wolf. That made me begin discovering my powers and practicing them, along the way to a far away home. After a few weeks, they turned back and I never saw them again. I was eight then, and now I am fourteen, and I am still taunted by nightmares of that day in the house I built with the help of many animals. They taught me how to live like them, the wolves the most however. I eat like them and catch my prey in that form, which is my favorite one of them all. I can choose my appearance as any form, but I choose a black wolf with bright jade eyes most of the time, which is my trademark. My wolf brethren know me as Wolf with Green Eyes, but they call me Tala too.
Anyways, I don't go to school anymore, and live over a thousand miles away from my original house, where my parents were killed. I migrated this far, building small shacks and wrecking each of them along the way. This place is far from any civilization, though as a horse or any fast animal, it only takes me two days to get to the Burned society, where I buy goods and do anything needed to be done in my life. Nobody there knows me, but I am a prominent young lady with very clear pale porcelain skin with bright eyes most of the time.
My power is animal morph. My power's weaknesses are that currently, until I become senior in my powers, I can't keep a lot of my human intelligence when I morph. So sad....
My hair color is a soft ashy brown. My hair is usually up in a high ponytail. My skin color is a very pale white, though it easily tans in the summer. I have the occasional scratch and scar on my body, from battle. My skin has no ink. My eyes are hazel, changing with my surroundings. My body is iron under my agile form. I am five foot ten inches. I weigh roughly 125 pounds. I wear a pale olive dress usually, though my outfit varies. When I ride horses, I wear slacks and a collared shirt. I'm not one for proper attire.
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Post by Hunter Kirizaki on Sept 16, 2008 17:12:12 GMT -5
In your history, there is a problem.
In order to gain the powers of a Burned, you must be endangered by some other person or animal. It's not something you can gain simply because your parents were Burned. You need to add how she got her powers.
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Post by jade on Sept 16, 2008 17:42:52 GMT -5
I figured something like that... I didn't quite understand. But it's FIXED!!!
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Post by Hunter Kirizaki on Sept 16, 2008 17:51:30 GMT -5
You still don't have it. You have to explain HOW she got her powers. Was one of the humans hovering over her, about to stab her, when she got burned and fled? You have to be endangered to get the powers, and you have to be like a second away from death.
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Post by jade on Sept 16, 2008 17:56:05 GMT -5
Fixed?`
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Post by Hunter Kirizaki on Sept 16, 2008 18:03:32 GMT -5
Yup. Accepted! Nice job!
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